Friday 4 September 2015

Moment in Time: Rogue Wave


On a cold windy day, out on a beach, people are happily swimming in the water. 
Suddenly, there is a big, cold and icy tsunami, on its high legs, coming into crash down on the tiny people below! 
There is a suspicious woman down there at the end of the pier. Is she going to die? The tiny screaming people, with their hearts pounding, they are sprinting for their lives. 

Boom! Crash! The wall of water is about to crash down. It breaks the matchstick fence. I hope the people sprint fast enough.

1 comment:

  1. Check out all my clauses, they are bold and between the commas. How many can you find?
    From Max

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