The dogs The dogs are playing in the beach wait a minute are they playing or are they tackling each other. I don't know. How about we just say they are or is the big dog running over the small dog.
The big dog is looking in the distance. At who knows what.
Their fur is DRENCHED. The water around them is SPLASHING like glass braking on the Lino.
Great work Taylor. I like the way you have used your own voice as the person telling the story with... wait a minute are they playing or are they tackling each other. I don't know.
ReplyDeleteChallenge:
Highlight your activated nouns like Max W has. Using activated nouns makes your writing POP!
e.g.
dogs gliding
clouds floating