Tuesday 5 May 2015

The rodeo

I can taste the ice melting into my mouth from my snow cone.
I can see the time stopping as Dad made a great run on his horse in the competition.
I can smell all the horses galloping around me. 
I can feel the hair from mum's horse Wrangler as I brush him.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Tegan I like how you put in full stops my fav line is I can see the time stopping as dad made a great run on his horse in the competition.
    from AAC

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