Buddy writing edited
Title: Vicky Angel.
Author: Jacqueline Wilson.
Illustrated by: Nick sharratt.
9/10 marking.
Jade is a girl who lost her best friend Vicky at only 11 years old. She was so used to Vicky deciding what to do but now Jade does not know what to do any more.
When Jade goes back to school it will be terrible. HOW WILL SHE COPE?
If Jade forgets about Vicky then it will leave an empty hole in her heart can’t just forget about Vicky, Jade won’t eat , sleep or drink also she lost heaps of weight.
Find out what happens next in Jacqueline Wilson Vicky Angel, and how did Vicky pass away?
By Brigid. :)
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Before editing
Author: Jacqueline Wilson.
Illustrated by: Nick sharratt.
9/10 marking.
Jade is a girl who lost her best friend Vicky at only 11 years old.
Jade was so used to Vicky deciding what to do but now Jade does not know what to do.
She can't stop thinking about Vicky.
She can't go back to school after the tragic event.
Nor eat , sleep or drink and lost 2 kg's in one week!
Find out what happen's next in Jacqueline Wilson Vicky Angel, and how did Vicky pass away?
By Brigid.
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