My opinion:
I believe that cats are better than dogs for a family pet.
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First dogs bark at night. Some dogs always get lost.
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Imagine at three a'clock in the morning Imagine you in your car in the rain
your dog is still barking. looking for your dog.
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Make sure you go to the pet store and buy a cat.
I believe that cats are better than dogs for a family pet.
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First dogs bark at night. Some dogs always get lost.
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Imagine at three a'clock in the morning Imagine you in your car in the rain
your dog is still barking. looking for your dog.
Call to Action
Darcie - well done on using the planning frame. The challenge is to then put it into clear sentences and each section is a paragraph. We don't need the headings at the top of each section.
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I believe that cats are better than dogs for a family pet.
The first and most important reason is that dogs bark all the time. They are especially annoying when they bark at night. Imagine at three a'clock in the morning
and your dog has been barking for hours. I bet you'd wish you had a cat then!
Hey Darcie - where did you get the image from? Have you acknowledged the owner?
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