Buddy Editing - William & Brigid

After buddy editing:

I believe that a cat is a better pet than a dog because…

To begin with, your on your sofa sipping hot milo and dreaming about a fluffy cat, your phone rings and someone says that your dog is at there house you spill your milo down your shirt in shock. You have to go and pick up your dog in the pouring rain.

Imagine walking down the in your best jeans, you have to walk your dog because they were yapping wildly for a walk and it starts raining. what would you do then if your dog got into a fight with another dog.

So just remember to get a cat instead of a dog!

By William. 


Before editing:
A cat is the best pet!

I believe that everyone should have a cat not a dog.

To begin with dogs fight just think if you were going for a walk and your dog saw a different dog and then it started fighting with the different dog what would you do then.

Also cats don’t scare you. Would you like a pet that is a fluffy friend of a grubby friend.

Go out and get yourself a cat if you.

by William