Sour Strips - Nate and Blake
This is what we started with
Sour strips are stuck to my teeth like rainbow peanut butter.
They are stripy like a colourful zebra in the circus.
They are the colours of leaves in Autumn.
This is what Nate and Adele edited to make it sound better.
Sour strips are stuck to my shiny white teeth like brand new super glue.
They are as stretchy as purple gum.
They are as colourful as rainbow streamers hanging from the bright blue roof.
They are as yummy as ice cream soda fizzy drink and a chocolate cake that has just come out of the oven
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