Buddy Editing Taylor

Moment in Time: Dogs at the Beach by Taylor

Edited with a ako buddy

               

The Dogs are playing in the Beach. Wait a minute are they playing or are they “tackling” each other? I don't know. How about we just say they are or is the big dog “running” over the small Dog?

The big Dog is looking in the distance. At who knows what. Their fur is “DRENCHED”. The water around them is “SPLASHING” like glass breaking on the Lino. And their fur is  

The soaking dogs are playing and splashing around everywhere and there fur is like “spikes” on there big or small bodies.

Before Editing:

The dogs The dogs are playing in the beach wait a minute are they playing or are they tackling each other. I don't know. How about we just say they are or is the big dog running over the small dog.

The big dog is looking in the distance. At who knows what.

Their fur is DRENCHED. The water around them is SPLASHING like glass braking on the Lino.