Wednesday 2 March 2016

Camp by Campbell S

Low ropes and camp I went to living springs for camp. I went with all the year4's. I went last week . When we arrived Allana split us up into groups. Then we went to see our rooms. The people in my room was me, William and Brody. The cabin I was in was noisy. Living springs had trampolines, a rope swing, mini-golf. Camp was fun because we got to go to the ropes course.
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  1. Allana T9:54 am, March 03, 2016

    Hi Campbell,
    We really like the way you have used commas in your list between each name. Good work.
    To make this even better, read your post out loud to check it makes sense:
    Low ropes and camp I went to living springs for camp.

    From Moller writing group

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