Friday 27 November 2015

Buddy Edit - Lexie and Kelsey

Buddy Edited:


Rocky road mountain
One evening a kid called Charlotte decided to go  For a walk on Rocky Road Mountain
Charlotte told her mum and off she went. Charlotte started climbing when she heard a noise coming from behind her Charlotte turned around and a zombie was there.

She got so frightened that she started to run up the mountain when she finally gets to the top three is a cliff. Her mother was there to. "What happened to you mum" Charlotte said.


"It doesn't matter now. I'll discuss it with you later. Right now we've got to get out of here".
"I agree" said Charlotte, so they started to defeat the zombie together. And the zombie went to jail for the rest  of the year.

The zombie was tall and green like a leaf, his eyes were deep
black like a door knob of a haunted house.



Before Buddy Editing


One evening a kid called Charlotte decided to go  For a walk on Rocky Road Mountain
Charlotte told her mum and off she went. Charlotte started climbing when she heard a noise coming from behind her Charlotte turned around and a zombie was there. She got so frightened that she started to run up the mountain when she finally gets to the top. When she comes to a cliff. Her mother was there to. "What happened to you mum" Charlotte said.
"It doesn't matter now. I'll discuss it with you later. Right now we've got to get out of here".

"I agree" said Charlotte, so they started to defeat the zombie together.

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