Buddy Editing - Kelsey & Lexie

After lots of Buddy Editing:

LILY PAD LAKE

By Kelsey on May 12, 2015    Buddy Edited

In a small town named Chewy, a little girl named Poppy sat at the table chewing on some chewing gum that she picked from the supermarket. “Yum what a delicious piece of chewing gum.”

Then suddenly a big cheeseburger gobbled her up! “Ohhhhh!” As she fell down the stomach of the cheese burger.

Then suddenly BUMP!!! She landed on a soft petal of a lily pad. “Where am I?”  She said as she fell into some chilly water.

You're in Lily pad lake said a voice that was to be heard by a oldley she turned around and a turtle stood behind Poppy.

”Why thank you sir.”

Poppy swam to the shore of the lake. The lake was big it was not just any big size it was as big as the ocean but it was full of Lilly pads. “”What are you doing here SNAPPED!!! a crocodile. Poppy jumped screamed like this Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!  And ran away. I want to go back home but how can I? “Aha”! Said poppy I need to tickell the ground then he will laugh and spit me out and that's what happened!

BEFORE  Buddy editing:

     

Lily pad lake

In a small town named chewy a little girl named poppy sat at the table chewing on some chewing gum that she picked from the supermarket. Yum what a delish piece of chewing gum. Then suddenly a big cheese burger gobbled her up! Woahhhhhh! as she fell down the stomach of the cheese burger. Then suddenly BUMP!!! she landed on a soft petal of a Lilly pad. where am  I?  she said as she fell into some chilly water. Your in Lilly pad lake said a voice that was to be herd by a oldley she turned around and a turtle stood behind Poppy. Why thank you sir said Poppy. Poppy swam to the shore of the lake. The lake was big it was not just any big size it was as big as the ocen but it was full of Lilly pads. What are you doing here SNAPED!!! a crocerdile. Poppy jumped screamed like this Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!  And ran away.I want to go back home but how can I? Aha! Said poppy I need to tickell the ground then he will laghth and spit me out and thats what happend!