Friday 27 November 2015

Zoe- edit pony story

Ponies are my FAVOURITE animal. I like them because you can have fun by riding on them. But the thing that I do not really like about ponies is that you have to pick up their poo.
I have always wished to have a pony! Unfortunately my mum is allergic to them also my dad absolutely HATES ponies! I do not get how someone could hate such a pretty creature.
 Anyway no one can stop me from dreaming about ponies! Which I am very happy about! Do you like ponies? I hope you do! I feel sorry for you if you are allergic to ponies.


                                           This is the first story that we edit.

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